David,
Your optics are obviously working beautifully on what is a very difficult subject to photograph alive! Great details.
I too am puzzled by the noise... actually not so much by the overall level, but by the "unevenness". It is much heavier across the top of the frame (where there is also a faint magenta band). I'm puzzled why you used the higher 1/320 sec "FP" sync, while setting power levels on the flash manually. Is there any reason to do so? (Naturally the fasted sync speed possible is desirable, but I was under the impression this was primarily to use "pulsed" flash for high shutter speed sync). I've never tried this myself, and wonder if it may be a reason for the odd upper edge noise/streak.
U-DCA set at 2.0, Leitz Variozoom eyepiece (set at 5X) and 0.32X reducing lens relay
So does that translate into a 3.2X mag of the objective... i.e. 180X on sensor.