Doug,
Subject pose and stacking technique looks OK in these shots, but I still find the lighting too harsh to show off these subjects to best advantage.
Notice the large amount of "black" areas, where not enough light is getting back to the camera to register. Part of those are shadows, part are shiny surfaces that happen to be angled the wrong way to reflect any available light. Both aspects can be reduced by using a more "wraparound" light source. Take a look at Wim's setup at
http://www.photomacrography.net/forum/v ... php?t=3895 . It may not be clear from the photos, but I believe that in practice his subjects get held
inside the soup cup, roughly at the tip of the clip in the photos. That provides something like a full hemisphere of lighting, except for a dark hole in the middle where the lens sits. This arrangement will deliver light to almost everywhere the camera can see, and will provide significant reflections from any shiny surfaces that are angled less than 45 degrees away from the plane of focus. For another illustration of the effect of diffuse lighting, see
this post, 2nd panel, top row.
One trick to help adjust the lighting is to stop way down and take just a single modeling shot instead of a stack. It'll be too fuzzy to use for anything except evaluating the light, but you can see what you're getting immediately, on the back of the camera.
--Rik