Grey Mining Bee on red Background

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gstalker
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Grey Mining Bee on red Background

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Andrena cineraria (Linnaeus, 1758)Image

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Paar Punkte:
- Highlights zwischen den Augen ausgebrannt (Fell) außerdem rechtes Auge oben, darunter gleich unterbelichtet, sehr schlechtes Licht.
- Antennen & Flügel nicht symetrisch.
- Halos um die Antennen, über den Flügeln, generell viele Stacking Fehler.
- Hintergrund links zu hell, rechts zu dunkel, sauberer Verlauf wäre besser und ein hellerer Hintergrund hätte besser zur Fell Farbe gepasst.
- Haare scheinen hier und da zusammenzukleben.
- Grünstich auf dem Fell.
+ Einigermaßen sauber.

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Hi there gstalker,
This is a good start. The specimen is maybe not the greatest in shape, but good to learn from. Normaly I choose a neutral background such as either black or white. The light is a bit hash here and there.
I use a photographic tent. It´s a softbox where you put the specimen inside and the light outside. It soften the light in an easy way.
I think you should practise on more specimen. Maybe catch some yourself to get fresh ones....

Keep em coming :D

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Kind Regards
Harald

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Thank You Harald!
( use my 18-55 kit lens with reverse ring )

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